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Post by Puck on Apr 4, 2011 19:47:39 GMT -5
Just give a little more on the history. Where exactly are they from? Did they have parents? Did they ever have friends? Why are they like they are? Just some suggestions. ;D
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Post by The Stabbington Brothers on Apr 5, 2011 9:06:22 GMT -5
thanks for the tips!! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by The Stabbington Brothers on Apr 5, 2011 9:13:49 GMT -5
Name: Victor and Hugo Stabbington Age: 18 Gender: Male Height: 6’6” Weight: 230 lb. Physical Appearance: Two tall, stocky young men with short, ginger hair. Victor has a scar on his cheek and sideburns. Hugo has a scar across his lips and wares an eye patch. They both ware mostly black and carry swards. Personality: Both are cruel, malicious people. They enjoy causing others pain. They also love getting revenge and can hold a grudge for years.
History: When they were 6 years old their parents were killed in a fire that destroyed their entire farm. They were sent to an orphanage and while they were they were abused and neglected. They were forced to fend for themselves at a very young age and often had to steal what they needed. This was what caused them to be so cruel and unfeeling toward the rest of the world. They never had any friends and no one knows exactly where they are from. They received their scars in a fight when they were 15. They had to leave their old town because they committed several crimes and were being chassed by the police so they came here and enrolled at this school to remain as inconspicuous as possible.
House: Venomfang
Allies: each other
Enemies: everyone
Year at School: Senior
Favorite Subject: War/weapons
Peace or Power: power
Sample Post: The two boys moved with extreme stealth and ease; this was something they had done dozens of times before. All they had to do now was nock out the guards and they should have no more problems. They had to get in, grab the merchandise, and get out…
The guard the snuck up behind couldn’t have been more that 16, he was still just a boy. Victor raised his hand and brought his fist down on the back of the boy’s head and just like that he was out. The two moved on, Hugo following Victor. Soundlessly they moved in and grabbed the merchandise , and without a trace they were gone.
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Post by Puck on Apr 5, 2011 9:15:15 GMT -5
Alright~ Approved! ;D
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Post by The Stabbington Brothers on Apr 5, 2011 9:16:02 GMT -5
Yay, happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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