Zelda

[zelda]

My application

[Gir]

Erm... you fill this template out and put it up: animatehigh.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=guidelines&action=display&thread=8

[light]

Name: zelda
Age: 17
Gender: female
Height: 5
Weight: 110

Personality: Zelda is a brave girl. She fought in many battles along side link. She is smart and strong. She has the power to hover, make fire balls, and shapeshift into her warrior form, sheik. Zelda has brown hair and blue eyes and is usually wearing a dress and boots.

History: Zelda was born and raised in a palace. She was always known as princess Zelda. She wanted adventure so she created a warrior form that she could turn into: sheik. Zelda fought in battles with her friend link and learned how to hover and use fire. Things eventually got bad at the castle so zeldas parents sent her away to a place where she could still learn to fight and be a normal teenager. That place was animated high.

House: thunderhoof

Allies: link, pretty much anyone in her kingdom

Enemies: lots

Love Interest: no one really, but if he comes, link

Year at School: senior

Favorite Subject: combat

Peace or Power: peace

Sample Post: Zelda walked out of the cab and looked at the new adventure in front of her. “animated high.” She picked up her bags and started walking to the school. “guess im not a princess here! I will do great stop stressing!” she said to herself. She entered the big building. Her future awaits.

[Midori Ka]

we need more info. Her history, her personalitly, her apperance, and her sample post needs to be at least two paragraphs.

[light]

Ummm well I was doin this on my touch and for some reason it wouldnt let me fix the bottom paragraph thingy so yeah I'm gonna redo the paragraph here:

Sample post: Zelda walked out of the cab and stepped out on the fresh grass of her new life. "I really hope they like me!" she said to herself. She picked up her bags and started walking to the school. I hope I don't see anyone from my kingdom! I just want to be treated like everyone else! A normal student! She thought. She entered the big building. "wow." she said as she saw the inside. "I can't believe I'm finally here!" she sqwealed. She eventually found her dorm room in the house of emberclaw. She unpacked all her belongings and walked out her dorm entering her biggest adventure yet

[Hinata]

we're sorry but while we appreicate the fact you want to be her we feel this app is...too vague. we're sorry

[kimi]

im sorry, but i have to give my opinion (thats just the way i am ) but how is it to vague?

[Hinata]

i have never played zelda so i don't know how to say it. But it just doesn't seem well...how should i put it? i am not sure how to put it. Her history never really explains how she heard of animated high and well how she came there. i mean i am not really good at explaining why we rejected it. Talk to Maka, she might be able to explain it better than i would

[kimi]

alright, haha, don't worry i am a really bad explainer to!

[Hinata]

okay good

[zelda]

Honestly, I don't really understand how that's vague, I mean I'm not trying to start an argument or anything but if there's something you want me to change or add just tell me and I can change it. I thought the application was clear. I really wanna use this character so If u want me to add something just tell me. Thanks!

[Hinata]

we will think about it. and let you know tomorrow k?

[hannafalkcross]

I know I'm not a mod or anything, but I think what Hinata was meaning was there wasn't enough detail on the character which would show us how you intended to play her. Applications that are full of information and interpretation of character rather than just a few lines makes it easier to understand how in-character you play them and helps the mods select when a character is or isn't accepted.

I know that Clopin and Hinata don't really want a high school full of badly out-of-character players, just like you and I don't, and fuller apps help them do that.

Nothing against you, just stating in general that that's why they want more info in most cases on rp sites.

[Hinata]

thank you Hanna. that is exactly what i meant to say. ^.^

[zelda]

Ok I understand now! So I need more like personality detail? Because I will put more if you want me to. Thanks for reconsidering!