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Post by percy on Jan 10, 2011 15:05:03 GMT -5
"I know what your doing rin, your turning him against me!" he said.
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Post by Len and Rin on Jan 10, 2011 15:06:54 GMT -5
"No, why on earth would I do that? I loved you, remember. But you broke my heart." She smiled evily.
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Post by percy on Jan 10, 2011 15:07:21 GMT -5
"niko I didn't want her to die either! She was my friend and I would do anything to bring her back for you. I tried to stop her! I swear!" Percy explained.
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Post by Niko and Bianca on Jan 10, 2011 15:09:35 GMT -5
Niko sat on the floor crying. "I miss her." He said as he played with his skeleton ring. He looked down at the portal and jumped into it.
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Post by Len and Rin on Jan 10, 2011 15:11:07 GMT -5
"Well now look what you did! You made him leave!" she screamed at Percy.
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Post by percy on Jan 10, 2011 15:11:32 GMT -5
"niko!" great Percy thought. Now he is Goin to the underworld. Percy jumped in after him.
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Post by Niko and Bianca on Jan 10, 2011 15:14:23 GMT -5
((the underworld: past school grounds.))
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Post by bloode on Jan 10, 2011 22:28:39 GMT -5
(guys, please please please please, longer posts at least one paragraph.)
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Post by Niko and Bianca on Jan 11, 2011 7:43:33 GMT -5
((K sorry))
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z3r0
Junior Student
Posts: 73
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Post by z3r0 on Jan 11, 2011 19:06:21 GMT -5
((its not that easy to do long paragraphs even after that website on how to make them longer))
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Post by Niko and Bianca on Jan 11, 2011 20:09:05 GMT -5
((Try to add more details. That usually works like.... how your character is standing, feeling, seeing, or even wearing.))
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Post by Niko and Bianca on Jan 11, 2011 20:17:51 GMT -5
Niko laid on his bed. He missed Bianca more than ever now. He fiddeled with his scull ring like he always did when he was anxious. Why he was anxious he had no clue.
Niko picked up his soccerball and threw it into the air over and over. He missed catching and it fell and hit him on the face. 'I probably deserved that' He thought remembering what had happened in the Underworld.
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yuki
New Student
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Post by yuki on Jan 11, 2011 20:20:28 GMT -5
((they found him?))
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Post by Niko and Bianca on Jan 11, 2011 20:29:47 GMT -5
((in the underworld yes))
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